Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
the light of the people. some people consider this as a way to jump into one's personal life, whereas others believe this as a medium to gain fame. I have discussed both views and have imparted my view in the below paragraphs.
Taking into account the views of later, gathering and publishing images of the famous individual with a message will allow youngster to get influenced by them and follow the same path. it is evident that the young people follow the actors and consider them as their role models. so, if the celebrities encourage teenagers to do not drop off from the school and make a better carrer, then they are mostly observed following them. Furthermore, the photos will allow them to come in the light and might get contract for their future movies or shows. For example, a star permits a paparazzi to take their picture nad post them on social media platform or so on will make it possible for the movie directors to see the abilities and qualities of the person. Hence, he might get admired and get the contract for a new film.
Considering the ideas of the former, capturing the photos even of their private life will make them to experience mental stress. For instance, a known folk is going to give divorce to his wife, and he is already going through a stressful situation. so, at this moment if the reporter reports about it in the paper then it will make it further frustrating for him.
In my opinion, it is really not a good idea to invade someone's privacy as it will make it hard for them to live a normal life like a average person.
To conclude, one should give celebrities some space and let them live their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55369127517 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39020652838 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6396712503 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252528630087 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809571855054 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543005812145 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139863533585 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423375688841 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.