Miss Barrett an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone who could help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
how you could help her in her home?
Why you would like to do this work?
Explain when you will be available
Dear Mrs. Barrett,
This is Hitakshi Patel here. I am writing this letter in order to show my willingness to help you organize your home and perform the other daily chores.
I am a home science student, and I really consider this as an opportunity to use the gained knowledge at the practical level. In my course, they have thought to differentiate the room in different areas and try to arrange things according to that. For instance, to fill up the space as well as to make to look nice and good, we can make use of furniture that is adjustable as well as foldable. Even more, I will not just stop at organizing, I will also help you label things in the kitchen as well as store the things in a way that will not only make it easy for you to find the but also will allow you to save some time for other activities.
Finally, I will inform you that I am available on just weekends from 1 Am to 6 pm as on weekdays I am taking my classes for my other course.
thanking you
Hitakshi Patel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...king my classes for my other course. thanking you Hitakshi Patel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, really, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21989528796 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43801476843 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6132171358 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 4.34317383033 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196193036152 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724842077387 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589135684097 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123809590166 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363896600857 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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