The two maps below describe a number of alterations which took place on a small offshore island. As it can be seen on the maps, the island has witnessed dramatic changes. Perhaps, the island has been urbanized for tourism reasons with less open space.
Before any constructions, there was no infrastructure on the island. Only a few coconut trees mainly existed on the west of the island. Also, there was a beach near the east edge however it was uninhibited.
It can be seen from the second map that there have been constructions of a new reception in the middle of the island and a large restaurant which is conveniently located just right behind the reception. Notably, a vehicle track is erected around the reception and perhaps extended to the restaurant on the north and the pier section on the south where the boats can land. Furthermore, there has been an establishment of residential areas between both sides of the reception and clusters of those houses are connected by a footpath which can lead to the beach. From the west of the island, there didn't use to be a swimming section on the beach, however it has now been constructed for the use of tourists.
Overall, the island has experienced numerous changes as it has been urbanized with more facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77958912476 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4229511378 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6363636364 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17759464823 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674415358196 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556053469785 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995770970024 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451358344029 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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