The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Human minds can be superior to machines, but before coming to this point we need to analyze the pros and cons of the statement. The first advantage which we can discuss is that machines do not have emotions incurred in them, still no machine or robot is build till date that they can tackle with any emotions. As having sense of emotion is important, because what are we doing right or wrong we can evaluate through it, and even through past experience which human have the tendency to understand ,but machines will not understand that if some things they are doing it in wrong way is right or wrong they will continue to those things until a human will correct the program in them.
Machines are restricted to solve only till the problems and issues which are there existing till date, If some new issue arises, and the machine do not know how to tackle it then the machines are of no use in that situation, but humans mind according to experience and presence of their mind they can handle the situation and tackle it. But the cons for this statement can be Machine when finding the solution will give you the accurate solutions for it for example the calculators which we use ,if there is a huge long calculations which need's to be done then calculation will give us accurate answer even with decimal point. But human may not give the accurate answer will have some human error while performing the calculations.
OfCourse because of machines the human mind efficiency increases and due to machines, day to day life chores have become more easier now days, it has helped human in many ways and have made the tedious job's easy, So that human can give more significance and his all energy to different more important work. But now days machines which human build may become harmful in deleterious ways to the young generation as it is making them lazy and they are not using their brain in that efficient manner which is needed, they are dependent on the technology for each and every daily work. Which maybe me harmful for their eyes, brain etc.
Hence it is guided that machines should not be used in excess manner and just be used as an help in our daily life, and we cannot conclude that human minds are always superior because there are both pros and cons, which can be listed down an taken action .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...n evaluate through it, and even through past experience which human have the tendency to unders...
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Suggestion: ,
...ch human have the tendency to understand ,but machines will not understand that if...
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Suggestion:
... them. Machines are restricted to solve only till the problems and issues which ...
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Suggestion: ,
...for example the calculators which we use ,if there is a huge long calculations whi...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'calculation'?
Suggestion: calculation
...s which we use ,if there is a huge long calculations which needs to be done then calculation...
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...ses and due to machines, day to day life chores have become more easier now days,...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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...deleterious ways to the young generation as it is making them lazy and they are n...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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...pros and cons, which can be listed down an taken action .
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...which can be listed down an taken action .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57487922705 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26590089501 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490338164251 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.606237627 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.4 118.986275619 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4 23.4991977007 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390318576761 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162897928629 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886738163487 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257310898413 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432102384959 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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