Failure is a catastrophic experience for some people. Tons of questions were given on this topic, if failure is a authentication that the desire wasn’t strong enough or not. I partially agree with this aspect, indeed, failure is affected by more criterion, both from external effects and by ourselves.
On the one hand, people fail to achieve their success due to low efficient productivity. To tell the truth, many people just want everything but they don’t even spend little endeavor on it. The most common reason why they can’t flourish achievements is they don’t know the dignity of purposes. When people can’t see a forceful reason, it will create internal force to help them achieve. To elucidate, if some wisely parents want their kid to study harder and receive higher score at class, they will civilize that kid the utility of studying and the kid must prosperously answer a question: “Why I have to do that?” If people can answer that question, they will able to reach to their aims and decrease failures, otherwise they can’t do anything.
On the other hand, I’m of the opinion that a person who really desires something can also fail. In facts, failure is a stable part in our lives and we are not purely perfect to accomplish something in the first attempt. It is not because we didn’t try hard and put efforts on it, some of the common reason is lacking of knowledge and experience. A research in China in the 2017-2019 period shown that more than 89 percent people despair new skill on their first try and less than 14 percent people can learn new skill auspiciously. To depict, Thomas Edison, a famous scientist who created electric light, were also fail thousands of time but he never gave up, until he prosperously made the first electric light on the world. If we fail but we don’t give up our targets, and we continue expand our knowledge, one day we can succeed.
In conclusion, failure is based on many effected fields, it is not only a confirmation that we didn’t try hard enough, but also a reality that we didn’t have enough experience. We are human and we have permission to fail. If we never give up our desire, we can do anything we want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'failed'.
Suggestion: failed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7545691906 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59218835134 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545691906005 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3953486433 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10853439639 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403119599271 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652115487736 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898575465022 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896103582775 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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