The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a citizen to Preston County.
“It has been observed over the past three years that the reports of damage and destruction of public property have steadily increased in Preston County. At the same time, it has been noted that there is a sudden increase in out-of-state travelers who have moved to Preston County over the past few years. Many citizens of the county believe that these migrants are responsible for increased incidences of vandalism. We therefore recommend that the county government should take firm steps to lessen the number of out-of-state migrants in order to prevent further destruction of public property and reestablish civic order in Preston County.”
As stated in the letter to the editior that the damage of public property of Preston County is taking place, and it is because of the increase in out-of-state travelers who have moved to Preston County.On what bases is Author is raising this questions againts these out-of-state travelers?As there is no proofs or any other research being done against the travelers showing that they have caused the destruction to the public property of Preston County.
Maybe the public property must be destroyed by some group of people who are residing outside of the Preston County, or even the damage must be done by some notorious group of people for the sake of fun and disturbing the government.As the author is recommending to the government that there should be firm steps taken to lessen the out-of-states migrants, but why are they getting blamed for these activities where they are not taking part in.The travelers use to come even earlier before three years, but only in past three years public property destruction is taking place that means the travelers are not commiting this destruction some one else is doing it, and they are not the one to blamed.
The destructors of the public property may be the opponent party of the government who must be destroying these public property to get the government down. And they may be doing this at night time where there may be less number of locals present or no one to observe them.
Hence, keeping in consideration all these statements the argument is flawed one and we cannot agree to this point that out-of-state travelers are destructiong the public property. There are many reasons of the destruction. The government can take measures like putting CCTV cameras or any other securty and find the culprits of these public property destruction.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or that the damage of public property of Preston County is taking place, and it i...
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...velers who have moved to Preston County.On what bases is Author is raising this qu...
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Suggestion: As
...ns againts these out-of-state travelers?As there is no proofs or any other researc...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no proofs'?
Suggestion: there are no proofs
...againts these out-of-state travelers?As there is no proofs or any other research being done agains...
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Suggestion: As
...ke of fun and disturbing the government.As the author is recommending to the gover...
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...ities where they are not taking part in.The travelers use to come even earlier befo...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ey are not taking part in.The travelers use to come even earlier before three years...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...lers are not commiting this destruction some one else is doing it, and they are not the...
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... some one else is doing it, and they are not the one to blamed. The destructor...
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... these statements the argument is flawed one and we cannot agree to this point t...
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...he argument is flawed one and we cannot agree to this point that out-of-state tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 302.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96026490066 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68062258956 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486754966887 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.950290554 57.8364921388 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 119.503703932 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 23.324526521 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195707797266 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784541954752 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070587807599 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118858945178 0.128457276422 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686023371614 0.0628817314937 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.3799401198 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.3550499002 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.197005988 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 12.3882235529 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or that the damage of public property of Preston County is taking place, and it i...
^^
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...velers who have moved to Preston County.On what bases is Author is raising this qu...
^^
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ns againts these out-of-state travelers?As there is no proofs or any other researc...
^^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no proofs'?
Suggestion: there are no proofs
...againts these out-of-state travelers?As there is no proofs or any other research being done agains...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ke of fun and disturbing the government.As the author is recommending to the gover...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ities where they are not taking part in.The travelers use to come even earlier befo...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ey are not taking part in.The travelers use to come even earlier before three years...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...lers are not commiting this destruction some one else is doing it, and they are not the...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some one else is doing it, and they are not the one to blamed. The destructor...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... these statements the argument is flawed one and we cannot agree to this point t...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he argument is flawed one and we cannot agree to this point that out-of-state tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 302.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96026490066 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68062258956 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486754966887 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.950290554 57.8364921388 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 119.503703932 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 23.324526521 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195707797266 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784541954752 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070587807599 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118858945178 0.128457276422 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686023371614 0.0628817314937 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.3799401198 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.3550499002 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.197005988 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 12.3882235529 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.