The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is suggested by some people that the highest priority of science should be its contribution to enhancing the quality of life. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons.
One reason is that products that make people’s lives more convenient are the results of scientific research. That is because, without research, it's hard to say whether a device is safe enough for daily usage. For example, before a rice cooker is sold in the market, there are many evaluation stages that need to be involved to guarantee that the product is not harmful to its users. Furthermore, scientists should have done some different kinds of experiments to make sure the new version of a product is performing better than its old one. Take the iPhone as an example, without researching Apple cannot introduce upgraded versions of their products annually.
Another reason is that science can help people suffering from serious diseases. Nowadays, there are many cases in which patients successfully survive from some kinds of cancer, which was impossible a decade ago. Thanks to the continuous development in the field of medicine, scientists have found out up-to-date methods for some dangerous diseases such as blood pressure, heart attack,… . Take the COVID-19 disease as an example, we can see how the advancement of science can help people survive through one of the most dangerous diseases with any individuals.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that one of the most critical roles of science is to upgrade the standard of living of its population for the above-mentioned reasons.
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- The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evaluation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many evaluations'.
Suggestion: many evaluations
...cooker is sold in the market, there are many evaluation stages that need to be involved to guar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... such as blood pressure, heart attack,… . Take the COVID-19 disease as an example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15589353612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81084087886 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9901946645 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160988776357 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601485711303 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565985327007 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114203681094 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719955614813 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.