It is an irrefutable fact that xenophobia has accelerated rapidly, in this contemporary world, has become an integral part of our society. Considering this scenario, whether or not xenophobia has increased rapidly in the western countries has become a matter of discussion. However, this essay will ascertain both the problems as well as the solutions to this before deducing a reasonable conclusion.
There are numerous problems wherein this opinion that xenophobia has increased can be supported. To begin with, people have become conscious of their skin colour is the most substantial factor. It is generally seen that people have become aware of different religions in their countries being practised. Therefore, this is a major factor. For instance, an article in The Age revealed that 80 percent of the people support this viewpoint. In addition, people now prefer migration to other countries is another factor to consider.
Despite the problems discussed above, there are others who assert that there are solutions to xenophobia. Firstly, having equality in the society by the government can be most substantial factor. It is commonly seen that skin colour should be ignored by individuals and treatment for everyone should be on equal basis by the government. Secondly, government should make some reforms for the whole country to follow should be another factor to consider.
In the end, indeed it may be true that xenophobia has increased rapidly in the western world; however, I am still opinionated that equality should be promoted in the western countries by both individuals as well as the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
...our society. Considering this scenario, whether or not xenophobia has increased rapidly in the...
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Suggestion: and
... essay will ascertain both the problems as well as the solutions to this before deducing a...
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Suggestion:
...ay be true that xenophobia has increased rapidly in the western world; however, I...
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Suggestion: and
...e western countries by both individuals as well as the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31128404669 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87470437917 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.485982388 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273229679678 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915053585338 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729354658124 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175541839363 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627514333335 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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