You rescently organised an all day meeting meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel and in your letter,
Say what participants like
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what manager should do to improve the food
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to provide feedback for the sevice provided by your hotel, "The Taj" to our company, "the Tilo" for all day meeting on 23rd March, 2023.
I am really glad to share that thew customer service provided by the crew at thje hotel was really amazing.for instant when we enter ,they welcom us with soft drink and then showed us the direction for the meeting room in polite manner. Furthermore,the sitting arrangement was appropriate as per the meeting. It allowed the viewers to have the clear view of speaker and vis-e-versa.
The only thing,that dissappointed us was the inproper labeling next to the serving counter of the food . Some of our participants were veggitarian. As a the cuisine that was on the table did not had any name or the ingridents mention next to the vessel mad it inconvenient for a visitors to find what they are etting. In order to address this issue i will suggest you to put labbles along with ingridents list next to the serving pot.
However, It was great exprience and we would love to have some other meeting organized there if our concern is kept in mind.
Thnaking you
Xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2023'.
Suggestion: March 2023
... Tilo' for all day meeting on 23rd March, 2023. I am really glad to share that thew...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...really amazing.for instant when we enter ,they welcom us with soft drink and then ...
^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...eting room in polite manner. Furthermore,the sitting arrangement was appropriate as ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...aker and vis-e-versa. The only thing,that dissappointed us was the inproper label...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... next to the serving counter of the food . Some of our participants were veggitari...
^^
Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...f our participants were veggitarian. As a the cuisine that was on the table did not h...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e cuisine that was on the table did not had any name or the ingridents mention next...
^^^
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a visitor' or simply 'visitors'?
Suggestion: a visitor; visitors
...t to the vessel mad it inconvenient for a visitors to find what they are etting. In order ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 350, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... etting. In order to address this issue i will suggest you to put labbles along w...
^
Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n is kept in mind. Thnaking you Xyz
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79702970297 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70243629539 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673267326733 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0525941066 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271214178326 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783033797018 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565725871365 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137095330164 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389378889455 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.