The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Today's young people are the future leaders for our governments, industries and in all other fields. One of the very important function of the society is to prepare young individuals for leading us into the future. Society has the capability to incite good virtues as well as bad virtues in today's young minds and prepare them for the future. According to my view, teaching the young about cooperation is a must for creating a better leadership; sense of competition alone does not make a good leader rather it takes the person away from achieving the bigger goal. Nevertheless, I do not totally agree with the statement presented here that inciting only cooperation rather than competitiveness into the young can made them better leaders in the future; instead they both can play a vital role in forming tomorrow's leaders.
Leadership involves cooperation - if leaders do not take the opinion of others under their authority, what do they become? Tyrants! Dictators! The world has seen its fair share of examples of what dictators have caused, for example, due to Hitler's own greed, he brought upon a war among the nations of the world a century ago and we still bear the burdens of it. A good leader listens to the people under their authority - one person cannot alone be responsible for everything. This is why there are specialists in different sectors and a leader's responsibility is to guide them and with the help of cooperation, lead the nation to a better future.
One may think that now the world leaders are elected through a very rigorous competition of elections; to get into a pretigious job (mainly governmental jobs), people need to compete with other candidates, students compete to get into good schools based on their merit. So yes, there is competition to get where we want to or to achieve our goals but once we reach there, it's important to forget the sense of competition and use cooperation to take better decisions. Ten brains working togther is always better than one brain toiling all day.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... specialists in different sectors and a leaders responsibility is to guide them and wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89212827988 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73017630088 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4060469901 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299288134252 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111188973561 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691543360979 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190671472727 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099186375004 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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