People living in big cities can face several problems
Most people nowadays hold a similar view that people living in big cities can face several problems and it is not eassy for people to solve it.
First of all, employment problem is one of the most difficult problems to solve nowadays. In big cities, with the urbanization, companies has applied technological equiment and artificial intelligence, so contribute to a tighter labour market and make people lost work. For instance, when ChatGPT was launched on November 30, 2022, lots of progammers in Buzzfeed company were laid off or taken a pay cut in order to stay. Along with employment problem, financial trouble is the big trouble. In big cities, almost everything we need to but are very expensive but people do not have too much money to pay all because of low-income.
Another problem to consider is safety problem and this is a problem that plagued local authorities in recent years. In light of the immigration from rural ares, the number of people living in big cities is too large to manage and control well. In additon, people are prone to malicious information and have dangerous activities. Furthermore, if people can not be accessed education or raised awareness of society, people will have violation such as sack, theft, assassin and even so. For example, The Blue Whale Challenge, also known as a social networking phenomenon that originated in Russia in 2016. The challenge consists of a series of quests that are given by one person to the player to torture himself for a certain amount of time, with the final challenge requiring the player commit suicide. Since then, many people questioned themselves, is the city reall safe?
In conclusion, big cities have a lot of problems, so we need to make own effort to overcome these difficuties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98657718121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74251215332 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6842412796 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445115971097 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133331049642 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145842355116 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287965169214 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19516763487 0.056905535591 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.