A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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... thing which one does in his entire life , thus taking a good education can change...
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... taking a good education can change the persons life completely . I partially agree to ...
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...partially agree to the given assertation . The first point is that if nation adop...
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...or the students to get evaluated equally . It would remove the gap between differe...
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...rent circulums which evaluate differntly . For example if a student studying in a ...
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...as different curriculum than other state , the student might lack a few important ...
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...he other state students are being taught . Thus a same curriculum would allow the ...
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...other state students are being taught . Thus a same curriculum would allow the stude...
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...cation and also to get equally evaluated . The second point is that if the nation...
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...riculum changes the particular state has , so they also can evaluate the stduents ...
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...ersity or college they have studied from . For example , a student who has studied...
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...ege they have studied from . For example , a student who has studied from the top ...
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...ier curriculum and test taking standards . If the national curriculum is adopted t...
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...nd there would be equal treatment to all . However , if a national curriculum is ...
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...n terms of the background they come from , the interests they have . Each state ma...
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...they come from , the interests they have . Each state may have its own unique hist...
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...ch state may have its own unique history , have culutural diversity & have its own...
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...utural diversity & have its own language . The national curriculum would not be ab...
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...able to justify each states own identity . For example , in India each state has i...
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...y each states own identity . For example , in India each state has its own languag...
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...in India each state has its own language , history . So the curriculum is designed...
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...ach state has its own language , history . So the curriculum is designed in a way ...
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...urriculum and also in their own language . Futhermore , each student has his own i...
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... also in their own language . Futhermore , each student has his own interests , ha...
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...ore , each student has his own interests , has his own abilities . So if a nationa...
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...is own interests , has his own abilities . So if a national curriculum is implemen...
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...ight find the curriculum too hard and a few might found it to be easy . Thus a national c...
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...hard and a few might found it to be easy . Thus a national curriculum can be very ...
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...s justifies these points. In conclusion , we can say that the authors idea of imp...
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...has many gaps which need to be addressed . It is a very optimistic but should cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86298076923 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7174157148 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413461538462 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4812896332 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.473684211 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341378040609 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109255872473 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724466782769 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170666968952 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105410778554 0.0667264976115 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.