In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Electric vehicles are becoming increasingly popular and one of the advantages of these vehicles is that they allow driver not to control them actively. From my perspective, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences, but I would agree that there are far more benefits.
There are several reasons why people might argue that driverless vehicles will be adverse. Firstly, it is true that there are more unemployment people when all cars, buses and trucks will be automated. This means all of drivers have to find a new job to ensure their lives. If governments cannot support them in such situations, it would be a burden of society. Another disadvantage is the risks of out of control. It is clear that if the operation of automated vehicles has a problem, the huge damage could happen. Therefore, the ability of controlling and issues related to workforce are often be seen as drawbacks of driverless vehicles.
On the other hand, there are various advantages of new mode of transport. A obvious benefit is these cars, trucks can run all day regardless of areas and climates. It would be a huge opportunity for companies located in severe areas like dessert, pole and where people cannot approach. Secondly, it would support to reduce the greenhouse gases because the governments could optimize the transportation and the energy, the exhausted fumes will be cut in the lowest level. Finally, people can do a lot of things when they are free of controlling a car. Instead, they can so useful thing that make life easier and more convenient.
In conclusion, driverless vehicles will be predominant in the future. This trend might have some drawbacks but I believe that these advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05594405594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84554382563 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7684547438 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0588235294 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362476616186 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107378964116 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101241560112 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220140790692 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972113294616 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.