The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the proportion of population in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia who living in urban areas between 1970 and 2040.
It is clear that population in four countries are expected to increase in the mentioned period. Malaysia was seen the highest rise at the end.
In 1970, the percentage of the population living in cities of four Asian countries were 14%, 18% for Indonesia and Thailand respectively, while 30% and 31% for Malaysia and Philippines respectively. After the following 50 years all three countries saw the increase in their population, expect to Philippines decreased the number of people who live in big cities in the period from 1990 to 2010.
After 2010, four countries in Asia increased the city dwellers but Indonesia and Malaysia are two countries that have the significant increase compared to two other countries in the same area. At the end of period Malaysia have about 85% people live in urban area, while the figure for Indonesia was around 60%, approximate 4 times increase. Between 2010 and 2040, population living in cities of Thailand and Philippines are expected to rise but in lower rate at 45% and 52% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Malaysia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ame area. At the end of period Malaysia have about 85% people live in urban area, wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08762886598 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81983262849 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.781867934 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.375 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212290109527 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10161512568 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595117619567 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139750911801 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456134284217 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.