Scientists always plays vital role in development of the human kinds since long years ago. Research done by the scientists helps people in various aspects sometimes their research involves major of the populations and sometimes not. The prompts recommends that scientists should not focus their research of the area that does not likely to benefit for the lower numbers of the people. In my opinion, I mostly agree the fact that research should include for the benefit for the major populations because of the two reason and I also concede that if including big populations needs larger amounts of the fund and ambiguous nature of the research then research might be performed for the sake of small populations.
Firstly, Scientists include the various aspects in the research that might be in the favor of the human welfare by including the various factor that helps in the benefit of the largest populations. For an instance, In 2023 scientists do a research in the field of science that leads to the control of the major problems like Covid. It affect the largest populations and due to the research perform by the biologist , today we are free of the Covid.
Secondly, The nations had always a certain amount of the fund for the research program and it should be properly used for the citizen. Investing the larger amount of the money in a field that does not helps for the people has no meaning in performing research.
Lastly , if there is fund limitations and sometimes in the situations and including the larger amount of the people in the research might not produce the proper conclusion and that leads to the disadvantages of people. So research have to be perform for the little people. For an examples, a road have to be build in a places such that it is separated from the city by forest so the research have to done for the people of the particular area and includes little people not for all national populations.
In conclusion, based on the above opinion of mine , I mostly agree to the given prompts.
- People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting 50
- Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position y 50
- The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette a local newspaper The primary function of the Committee for a Better Oak City is to advise the city government on how to make the best use of the city s limited budget However at 74
- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 50
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...sion, based on the above opinion of mine , I mostly agree to the given prompts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61231891799 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422857142857 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9960269371 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215751449134 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969528706938 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766417752106 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120922028014 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754879751411 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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