Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Requiring teenagers to do unpaid work in their free time has become a hot topic of debate. Some people believe with this.However,others disagree with those ideas. I completely believe that it is critical to involve children in volunteer activities. The primary issues will be discussed with examples in this essay.
On the one hand,there are many benefits to unpaid work. Firstly, doing volunteer work can improve awareness of responsibility for young people, and they can learn many life skills too. Second, it can update teamwork abilities and bring a better future to children when they join volunteer work. For example, they will have many useful skills in their work, such as easily talking to unknown individuals or completing tasks quickly that are assigned.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to that issue. Unpaid work can directly affect the income of teens and make them feel stressed when they have to arrange their schedule to do work and study at school. For example, they do too much work and cannot focus on lessons at
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68641936034 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6379145441 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223876594914 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796558987598 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494344976297 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146740327808 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386931912782 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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