Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people believe that all teens should be required to do some unpaid work in their free time to support the local community. They believe this would bring advantages to both the individual teen and the community. However, some disagree with this.
From my perspective. I strongly believe that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work, and I will discuss both reasons why I agree and why some people disagree with this.
On the one hand, when teens do unpaid work, they will earn many benefits for themselves and for their community as well. They would gain many soft skills, such as communication skills and teamwork skills. Moreover, they would also gain confidence and build more beautiful relationships. They will realise that they are also a part of their community and have responsibilities responsibillity to it. This is also the reason why many people agree with that.
On the other hand, many people, including teenagers, disagree, and they think that teens don't have to do unpaid work because they suppose that teens must spend all their time in study, so they don’t have time to do unpaid work. They said they have to focus on their future. They also think that teens should do the housework instead of community work to help their parents.
In conclusion, people discuss this topic every day; there are always two opinions, but to me, all teens should be required to do unpaid work because we all have responsibilities to our community..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92771084337 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61549094635 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.0066850475 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313898034114 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117563347854 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120852125877 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215844442242 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670424833034 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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