The table below gives information about a restaurant s average sales in three different branches in 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table illustrates figure of restaurants average sales in three branches in 2016.
Overall, it is clear that Vancouver Georgia Street was on top and had the highest statistic in all aspects. In addition, the most popular item in all three place was related to chicken.
Firstly, in Transactions Value, Georgia had a figure up to 10.69$ while Dunsmuir just had 5,61$, which was the lowest by three branches. Beside, number of Eat-in Transactions in Dunsmuir was 358, higher than Drake 158 and lower than Georgia nearly 50. Followed by, number of Take-Away Transaction in Dunsmuir continue had the same results with Eat-in with 392, 190 and 405 respectively.
When in Vancouver Georgia Street, there were 854 number of Transactions, Vancouver Dunsmuir and the Drake one had significant lower number with 750 and 390 respectively. Drake Street was not only the lowest number in Transactions, but also in Number of Eat-in Transactions anf Take-Away one with 200 and 190 in order. The only one aspect that Drake Street wasn't lowest was Transaction Value with 9.02$, higher than Dunsmuir one nearly 4$. The most popular item in all branches was Chicken Burger in Georgia Street, Chicken Wings in Dunsmuir Street and Chicken Pasta in Drake Street.

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Average: 7.8 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$69'.
Suggestion: $69
...ns Value, Georgia had a figure up to 10.69$ while Dunsmuir just had 5,61$, which wa...
^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
... up to 10.69$ while Dunsmuir just had 5,61$, which was the lowest by three branches...
^^^
Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
.... The only one aspect that Drake Street wasnt lowest was Transaction Value with 9.02$...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$02'.
Suggestion: $02
...snt lowest was Transaction Value with 9.02$, higher than Dunsmuir one nearly 4$. Th...
^^^
Line 4, column 435, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$4'.
Suggestion: $4
... 9.02$, higher than Dunsmuir one nearly 4$. The most popular item in all branches ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08292682927 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63966900743 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1383492497 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509210297313 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408208085681 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978005344291 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930283693973 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13808452871 0.0819641961636 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$69'.
Suggestion: $69
...ns Value, Georgia had a figure up to 10.69$ while Dunsmuir just had 5,61$, which wa...
^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
... up to 10.69$ while Dunsmuir just had 5,61$, which was the lowest by three branches...
^^^
Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
.... The only one aspect that Drake Street wasnt lowest was Transaction Value with 9.02$...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$02'.
Suggestion: $02
...snt lowest was Transaction Value with 9.02$, higher than Dunsmuir one nearly 4$. Th...
^^^
Line 4, column 435, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$4'.
Suggestion: $4
... 9.02$, higher than Dunsmuir one nearly 4$. The most popular item in all branches ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08292682927 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63966900743 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1383492497 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509210297313 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408208085681 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978005344291 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930283693973 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13808452871 0.0819641961636 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.