Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter
Invite him/hwr to a public event in your country
Describe the public event
Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit
Dear Asiya,
I hope you're alright and having good time at home. It's been such a long time since we last met.
I just would like to invite you in my country for a short vacation. In my country, there is a popular event happening this year where people happily gather to partying hard from all around world.
This famous event held once a year in various countries. In this event, many people join for celebration of new year and it will be really fun to join. This is very exciting and amazing event we would have a great time there.
Beside this event, you can meet my parents and they will be extremely surprise to see you around. Moreover, after new year party, if you have a little time, probably, we can visit some of the beautiful historical sites in my town which was build during 17th century.
I'm very excited to see you soon.
Lots of Love,
Kaushik
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Asiya, I hope youre alright and having good time at home. I...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w year party, if you have a little time, probably, we can visit some of the beaut...
^^
Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... a little time, probably, we can visit some of the beautiful historical sites in my town w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...which was build during 17th century. Im very excited to see you soon. Lots o...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
... Im very excited to see you soon. Lots of Love, Kaushik
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4875 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11999410377 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0021164541 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157434388278 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572023941983 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405772106916 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783977126604 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252179666436 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Asiya, I hope youre alright and having good time at home. I...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w year party, if you have a little time, probably, we can visit some of the beaut...
^^
Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... a little time, probably, we can visit some of the beautiful historical sites in my town w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...which was build during 17th century. Im very excited to see you soon. Lots o...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
... Im very excited to see you soon. Lots of Love, Kaushik
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4875 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11999410377 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0021164541 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157434388278 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572023941983 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405772106916 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783977126604 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252179666436 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.