Some people in today's society think that tourism may help in closing cultural barriers between people of various ethnicities and civilizations. Others argue that however, tourism causes a loss of heritage. This essay will go through the benefits and drawbacks of tourism growth and look at how it affects various countries.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that tourism promotes peace among people of different races, ethnic backgrounds, and cultural traditions.Visitors will know a lot about the nation they are visiting that the information can be used to solve gaps in culture.Additionally, tourism can assist the community to taking opportunities to promote itself and enhance its profile to the world.
Secondly, throughout the years, tourism fosters greater multicultural and business connections.There will be an increase in industries associated with tourism that are beneficial.Additionally, tourism may highlight a nation's potential for economic development and help big businesses to profit on its benefits.
In conclusion, tourism is today a profitable trend that links people all over the world and creates much income for each country.
In conclusion ,for a nation, the growth of tourism offers both benefits and drawbacks. While it considerably boosts the country's income and creates jobs, it also comes with drawbacks like pollution, cultural commercialization, and financial dependence. Governments and businesses must adopt ethical actions that take the protection of the environment, cultural heritage, and a fair distribution of tourism benefits as top priorities if they want to foster the future of tourism .Tourism is today a profitable trend that links people all over the world and creates much income for each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65283018868 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43565374058 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.020592464 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.444444444 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135117651788 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600529351147 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023158858159 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076742626581 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258715987707 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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