In this day and age ,many people say that classmates have more influence than their parents do.From my point of view, I totally agree with this opinion.
First of all, classmates can be understandable people. They are at the same ages and likely to understand each other thoroughly.In addition, they can assist each other to handle their problems such as sensitive secrets or something they can not talk with parents in an easy way so that they can find out suitable solutions. Moreover,they can teach each other skils or experiences that they gain from another. It helps themselves deal with some certain situations which parents did not educate them at home before.
Secondly, classmates can create a competitive environment . For examples, after exams, when they get worse results than their classmates they will take it as a motivation to try hard and do better at the next time.It can buid a positive learning environment for children so they will not be stressed or have pressure from study.
In conclusion, we can not deny that classmates can be be great encouraging-givers in our life.
- Children today are dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and joining in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors do you agree or disagree with this view 78
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to it s own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 61
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words
- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this day and age ,many people say that classmates have mor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...ve more influence than their parents do.From my point of view, I totally agree with ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ely to understand each other thoroughly.In addition, they can assist each other to...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...omething they can not talk with parents in an easy way so that they can find out suitable solu...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...an find out suitable solutions. Moreover,they can teach each other skils or experienc...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tes can create a competitive environment . For examples, after exams, when they ge...
^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...try hard and do better at the next time.It can buid a positive learning environmen...
^^
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...on, we can not deny that classmates can be be great encouraging-givers in our life.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98907103825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90060106378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.5826842841 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13733865235 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690212238368 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728015644722 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102935214905 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884234284711 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this day and age ,many people say that classmates have mor...
^^
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...ve more influence than their parents do.From my point of view, I totally agree with ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ely to understand each other thoroughly.In addition, they can assist each other to...
^^
Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...omething they can not talk with parents in an easy way so that they can find out suitable solu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...an find out suitable solutions. Moreover,they can teach each other skils or experienc...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tes can create a competitive environment . For examples, after exams, when they ge...
^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...try hard and do better at the next time.It can buid a positive learning environmen...
^^
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...on, we can not deny that classmates can be be great encouraging-givers in our life.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98907103825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90060106378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.5826842841 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13733865235 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690212238368 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728015644722 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102935214905 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884234284711 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.