The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparis

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart provided provides data on the percentage of the population in four different countries living in urban areas from 1970 to 2020, with predictions from 2030 to 2040.
Overall, all countries saw significant increases in 2020 except the Philippines. Malaysia had the largest increase, while the Philippines had slight fluctuations. It is predicted that Malaysia will have the biggest leap between 2030 and 2040 compared to the remaining countries.
The Philippines had the highest figure in 1970, over 30%. This ratio increased steadily in 1990 before falling below 50% in 2010 and rising to about 46% in 2020. This ratio is predicted to increase to more than 50% by 2040. Malaysia started with 30% in 1970 and there was a jump to over 70% in 2020, which was an all-time high and will continue to increase over the next 20 years.
Indonesia and Thailand both started at below 20% and increased sharply to approximately 30% in 2000. Indonesia then moved to higher than 50% in 2020 and is forecast to continue increasing until 2040. Thailand remained stable from 1990 to 2020, above 30%, and is expected to increase to more than 50% by 2040.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90256410256 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63045432213 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1186553754 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206977230876 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810959154292 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823528990632 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149617816995 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104146494101 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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