Some people believe that scientists have the greatest influence on the world. Other people think that the influence of politicians is greater.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Scientists and politicians are influencing because they have high knowledge of many aspects of society globally. Although politicians lead a country, they are the influence of a country, and sometimes in the world, I believe that scientists’ effect on awareness people is stronger than politicians'.
On the one hand, politicians use power to lead and influence their country and the global. So, they are important roles in shaping the growth of the nations. Each their a decided effect on the benefit of citizen or the development of the economy of their nation. For example: Donald trump used the president's power to impact on economy of the United States and other countries such as prohibiting Huawei products and increasing taxes for imported goods from China. This causes many companies to move their manufacturing from China to other countries like Vietnam, India,….
On the other hand, scientists spend so much time about 2,000 hours researching deep-dive and analyzing something. Of course, this information they researched that useful and impact on life of everyone in the world. For example: Politicians also use the research of scientists to spread citizens in their country and come up with solutions to solve the problems of the country. We are taught by schoolbooks, knowledge from books based on research of scientists. Scientists examine technologies and techniques in the medical field that help patients overcome diseases.
We can see that science is so significant for us. There is invention they researched more impact than politicians. Sciences make everything more comfortable and convenient than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3828125 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94371641103 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9228765734 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148562087086 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475790023391 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657273864874 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978878265816 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100918976089 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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