The picture below shows a hot balloon works.
The picture below shows a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram depicts the working of a hot air balloon.
Overall, envelop accounts for the largest part as well as the prime for the flying of the balloon. In addition, this diagram also shows that propane is used to create hot air.
Initially, primarily focusing on the base of the balloon, there is a basket that contains a propane cylinder. This substance chemical will be mixed with air in the burner in order to generate flame to heat the air. After that, the hot air is produced inside the envelope, make it risen. This is because the cool air outside in the atmosphere is heavier than the hot air.
Regarding the above part of the balloon, the skirt is set as the base of the evelope, which is formed by gores and panels. In addition, there is a parachute valve called self-sealing flap. It allows the hot air evade in a controllable way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a controllable way" with adverb for "controllable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...aling flap. It allows the hot air evade in a controllable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54901960784 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44447939579 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1708869058 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177191085416 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802885327883 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789549627342 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145074878859 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874085821561 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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