In a technologically advanced society, everyone is under attack from various digital devices like smartphones,ipad, TV,... These elements significantly affect how children behave and think. Before giving their children something or showing them something in particular, parents, in my opinion, should give serious consideration.
It is a known truth that practically every family has at least one TV in their home for everyone's amusement. Many parents still use TV as a method to divert kids from disturbing adult work, despite the fact that television has numerous detrimental consequences on human health, particularly the health and development of children. Sitting in front of the TV all the time can cause youngsters to only recall the things that are on the screen, regardless of what is happening around them, since "children like a white paper can write anything." When there is a barrier between children and parents, it is really harmful because parents may not be able to educate their kids the way they want to.
Because of this, I think parents need to understand how crucial their influence is on their kids' overall growth. All young children tend to emulate the conduct and attitudes of adults toward things, which will surely shape their personalities as they grow up. A child born into an odd household is likely to feel uneasy and nervous most of the time, according to study. Because the teacher stressed that "habits make personality, personality makes destiny," I believe that setting a good example for your children starts with you.
In conclusion, the fact that children absorb positive or negative things depends much on the educating method of parents. Therefore adults should be aware of which is good for the off-springs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, therefore, at least, i think, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26148409894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00038912517 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660777385159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.946316148 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191034796046 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612688366914 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047933773279 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101843840653 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553482822026 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.