Government should offer a free university to any student who has been admitted to university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Education is one of the basic need of every citizen of the world. Education teaches about discipline, critical thinking, encourage for innovation and give's the title of literate to those whoever pursue it. Education shape's every citizen's life and future by pursuing career in the area of interest. It help's in creating new leader's, scientists, entrepreneur's, businessman and many more for upcoming future. It even play a role in supporting one's knowledge which can be used to satisfy any criteria for job's either government or private sector.
First is the example of Dr A P J Abdul Kalam, who is also known as Missile Man of India. Born in poor family and studied hard to pursue his career in area of interest that is defence technology. He gave entrance examination for DRDO, an organization which provide advanced weapon's to Indian Army. The criteria for passing examination was to have rank less than 8 but even after trying 2 time he was able to grab rank 10 and 9 in both the attempt's. He just pursued this track just to get scholarship, as his family was not financially stable. What if we had given him scholarship earlier based on some criteria, he would have contributed more in defence technology.
Second is the example of Vishwas Patil, Indian Police Servant of Mumbai Province in India. He gave two attempt's to pursue his area of interest that is public service, he once said due to his family's financial instability he wasn't able to pursue his graduation from engineering stream. He would have contributed even in engineering part, if some how Government had managed to give him scholarship.
Third is the example of Tejaswi Yadav, Deputy Chief Minister of Bihar, Indian State in North-East. His is just 10th standard passed and leading a state on various front and even guiding his cabinet for future of the state. He is leading state on such front, that he is even not aware of and not have enough knowledge about but as his family is rich.
I do completely agree with the statement that government should help poor student's in achieving their career by providing them with some kind of scholarship's. But, government should have some firm rules, regulation and scrutiny about financial background so that the institution should not end up in wrong hand's. Every one should have right to pursue education, as it is one of the basic need.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of literate to those whoever pursue it. Education shapes every citizens life and future b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...oever pursue it. Education shapes every citizens life and future by pursuing career in t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
... many more for upcoming future. It even play a role in supporting ones knowledge whi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...to his familys financial instability he wasnt able to pursue his graduation from engi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...ontributed even in engineering part, if some how Government had managed to give him scho...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83415841584 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70271074625 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5081546476 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.65 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571905706979 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181381167318 0.0831039109588 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030103737831 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342224834135 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387402301185 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of literate to those whoever pursue it. Education shapes every citizens life and future b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...oever pursue it. Education shapes every citizens life and future by pursuing career in t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
... many more for upcoming future. It even play a role in supporting ones knowledge whi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...to his familys financial instability he wasnt able to pursue his graduation from engi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...ontributed even in engineering part, if some how Government had managed to give him scho...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83415841584 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70271074625 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5081546476 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.65 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571905706979 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181381167318 0.0831039109588 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030103737831 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342224834135 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387402301185 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.