People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to rather than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Shopping habits, nowadays, have been found at an immense level among individuals. And its is considered that such habits are more likely to be influenced by the age group to which a person belong instead of other factors. Although shopping is certainly affected by age, several other factors including financial status, love to purchase things and materialism also play an imperative role in it.
Admittedly, youngsters prefer to shop more than elderly due to use and throw culture, which is prevalent in the modern world. In other words, young children believe in believe in impulsive buying, and they always remain interested in following the current trend in various possessions ranging from technological gadgets, particularly cellphones, to branded clothes. As a result, they discard the old stuff even if it works well and in turn purchase the new one. For instance, Every year apple, a multinational company introduce new series of its smartphones that not only allure youth more But also let them buy, By throwing their old phones.
However, shopping also depends upon financial situation of an individual because of Affluent section of society are found to shop more in comparison to the deprived ones. To be more specific rich people no matter what no matter what their age group is adore purchasing luxurious items on frequent basis as they find it the best way to utilize their excessive money, whereas individuals, who some how manage to ear livelihood cannot purchase the thing unnecessarily.
Apart from this, the another important aspect in case of shopping is Shopaholic Nature. Since in today in today's epoch majority whether young or old, they often visit shopping malls and intend to buy stuff specifically the ones on discounts and offers. eventually, shopping is perceived as a leisure activity for humans of almost all age groups.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, juveniles indulge in purchasing new arrivals on account of being caught by latest trends, how much a person is financially sound well as shopping being the most captivating hobby are another reasons which impacts greatly one's inclination towards shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'believe in'.
Suggestion: believe in
...n world. In other words, young children believe in believe in impulsive buying, and they always remai...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...cessive money, whereas individuals, who some how manage to ear livelihood cannot purchas...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eventually
...cally the ones on discounts and offers. eventually, shopping is perceived as a leisure act...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e another reasons which impacts greatly ones inclination towards shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28279883382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78569559686 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650145772595 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0375080286 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.384615385 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242166959004 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763576989827 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528715760652 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117647285508 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654408522595 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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