Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both side and give your opinion
The internet has changed how we connect with others. It has both good and bad sides. It can bring people together and share knowledge, but it can also isolate and divide. In my opinion Finding a balance is the key.
One good thing about the internet is that it helps us connect with people far away. For instance, you can video call or use social media to keep in touch with friends and family who live in other places. It also helps us find people who share our interests and create new friendships.Another advantage is that it's easy to find information online. You can learn new things and share what you've learned with others, which can bring people closer as they learn together.
However, the internet can also lead to isolation. When we shop online, we might avoid local stores and neighbors. This can make our communities feel less close-knit. Excessive use of social media can replace real face-to-face interactions, making it harder to bond with others.Additionally, the internet can make us stick to our own opinions. We might only read things we agree with, which can create gaps and isolation between different groups of people.
In conclusion, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. It can connect us with others and provide knowledge, but it can also isolate us and create divisions. I believe the key is finding a balance between these two.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80401807228 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3253655418 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133937479739 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517993765935 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418480790549 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100140029472 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499733510337 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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