Places of watching films are the thing that people always argue about. In our lives today, some people say films can be watched on our gadgets at home, while the others say going to the cinema is a fully enjoyment of lives. For my point of view, going to the cinema is what people should try once in their whole lives.
First and foremost, individuals can have a full joy when going to the cinema, which is translated into having experience and memories by photos there. For instance, joy can be brought by dark rooms and big screens at cinemas, so that the films get to be much more thrilling and exciting.
On the other hand, watching films by gadgets can be known as bringing convenient to audiences that people can watch their favourite films everywhere and at anytime they like to. Moreover, staying at home and watching films can save plenty of money and time for individuals because in some countries, going to the cinema can be a miracle for some lower-classes.
In my opinion, although both of them have their own advantages, going to the cinema is a wonderful experience in our lives by enjoying the thrilling atmosphere in the cinema, taking photos after the cinemas. Besides, watching films at the cinema can gives us happiness of enjoying and going together with our beloved people.
It can be concluded that, Both of these views has their own benefits and it can depend on people circumstances. I believe that, going to the cinema and watching films there can be an experience in our lives if we want to go. We just live once, so choose which is the thing that we like in order to enjoy our life, create our own happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('fully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('enjoyment') instead of another adjective.
...e the others say going to the cinema is a fully enjoyment of lives. For my point of view, going t...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...sides, watching films at the cinema can gives us happiness of enjoying and going toge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62798634812 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4603839672 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1716699777 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449745972227 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185900821962 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102269742559 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26817226857 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756452273432 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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