In recent years, an increasing amount of people with health issues is choosing taking the available medicines rather than going to the doctor. Both these opinions have advantages and disadvantages. However, for my point of view, I believe seeing the doctor can be a better method.
First and for most, going to see the doctors can have a lot of benefits. Seeing the highly qualified people helps you recover from the illness as soon as possible. Not only going to the doctor helps you with curing the illness, you are having a tendency to learn the ways to prevent your illness. For instance, an individual is having a depression, he or she always thinks how to end the life quickly or searches the medicines to drink. At this time, the doctors are considered as god saviors to help this person. They can lead them to the positive lifestyle and help the person with healing the soul.
Furthermore, taking the alternative medicines can harm your health. If you don’t know your exact issues, you will easily take the wrong medicines. They can’t help you with curing the illness but can lead you to the death. Additionally, the medicines can cost you a lot of money. In the modern world, there are plenty of medicines which require you to take for a long time in order to cure your problems. As a result, it can cost you lots of money to buy. Taking an example of cancer individuals, if they don’t know their exact health problems, they just take the treatments they have. As a consequence, they are going to die extremely soon. In contrast, if they see the doctor, they will know their problems to cure. At this time, they can live for some years more than just taking the alternative medicines.
As my opinions given above, it can be concluded that, seeing the doctors will be the best method because of the time and the result of the illness. However, each individual who is having the appearance in the life always have the permission to find the fundamental way to be pleasured. If our choices are not negative and pessimistic, every choices will be possible.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to take'.
Suggestion: to take
...f people with health issues is choosing taking the available medicines rather than goi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67945205479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52992597261 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487671232877 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6260759135 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193106893012 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062002849511 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395665936107 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112811472035 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512429294179 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to take'.
Suggestion: to take
...f people with health issues is choosing taking the available medicines rather than goi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67945205479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52992597261 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487671232877 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6260759135 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193106893012 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062002849511 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395665936107 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112811472035 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512429294179 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.