Obesity rate and unhealthy eating habits have become an insurmountable problem in several countries during recent years. This trend can be attributed to many factors, including sedentary lifestyles, dietary preferences, and social changes. It seems to me that the most effective way to deal with this problem lies in implementing comprehensive preventative measures.
One of the significant reasons for the escalation of the obesity rate and junk food consumption is that our modern lifestyle prefers convenience. Usually, fast food chains are very clean and their service style is very professional and quick. A global civilization has led to the global expansion of massive fast-food businesses. Also, they are standardized, which makes it easier to know what you will get wherever you go. More importantly, the sedentary nature due to the rise of desk jobs has reduced physical activity levels.
To combat this issue and stimulate healthier eating habits, a continuous bilateral approach from education and government policies. There should be an acceleration and accentuation of educating individuals on the negatives of processed foods and raising awareness of balanced diets importance. This must involve combined efforts from family, school, workplace, and media. In addition, the government plays an integral part in supporting and promulgating regulations, including subsidies for fresh products, and poses stringent criteria for marketing unhealthy food.
In conclusion, the increasing prevalence of obesity and unhealthy eating habits can be attributed to societal changes, dietary preferences, and sedentary lifestyles. However, by implementing a comprehensive approach that includes education, and policy changes, it is possible to effectively prevent and address this alarming trend.
- The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month or more in the UK from 1984 to 2003 84
- In many countries obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing What are the reasons for this trend What is the most effective way to prevent it 78
- Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty others think that crime is a result of bad person s nature Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91221374046 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17384026814 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660305343511 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4368884647 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316028096064 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793754521597 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652876469823 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168981648179 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905558605645 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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