You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The provided table compares the amount of fish caught and imported by the city of Perth in Australia from 2004 and 2014.
Overall, it is apparent that Perth had more fresh fish from both sources throughout the specified period, with local catches significantly surpassing imports.
Regarding the number of fish caught by fishermen, there were 2677.7 metric tons of fresh fish in 2004, which saw a progressive increase before reaching its peak at 8136.2. Onwards, the local catches decreased continuously, almost halving its 2008 figure, despite a relative upswing to over 5000 in the final surveyed year. A similar pattern can be observed in the total amount of fresh fish, albeit peaking a year later, at nearly 9000 metric tons.
In terms of the amount of imported fresh fish, having imported 464.5 metric tons in 2004, Perth saw some fluctuations in its imports in the initial five years before reaching its highest point in 2010, with slightly over 1200 tons. However, these figures witnessed a consistent decline to 782.7 metric tons in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12138728324 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46679305866 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6255060277 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205677383945 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108721047396 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565057393056 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140360852318 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410553567944 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.