Nowadays, as we face increasing crises that impact the entire world, healthy partnerships between countries are becoming more essential than ever. Due to this, I strongly agree with this argument.
First of all, there are a numeroust changllens that necessary for country to have a good relationships. One of them is the climate change, it is not only happen in the Northern countries like Russia or Canada, it is happening all around the world. If only some industry religious like China or USA reduce their carbon footprint, the situation will not be improved; in constrast, if all countries from differents continents cooperate together, this will be resolved effectively and quickly. Another reason is the advantages in the economy. Every nation has its strong and weak points; some nations have a strong industry system and finances, while others are gifted with natural resources; so good partnerships will helps each countries to progess and grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...at necessary for country to have a good relationships. One of them is the climate change, it ...
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Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...al resources; so good partnerships will helps each countries to progess and grow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24836601307 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7883152687 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718954248366 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8298222942 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189783173743 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835423882456 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862778907416 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196922144881 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12358398318 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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