5. You have been looking for a job and have seen a job advertisement for a part-time position. Write a letter to the employer.
In your letter
• explain why you need the job;
• describe your skills and qualifications;
• say what days you are available.
Dear Mr. Sam,
I trust this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I intend to write this letter to discuss a job advertisement in your company. It's a part-time Project Manager Job posted by your HR team on LinkedIn. I am actively looking for a job these days as I have recently completed my master’s in project management from Xyz University.
I find myself a suitable candidate for this position. Before the degree, I had 8 years of experience in the field of Project Management. I have worked in three diverse industries Telecommunication, Banking, and Retail Financing. I have a sound understanding of the project management life cycle as I have executed large level of projects with a budget of 170 million.
I am attaching my resume for your consumption and would like to discuss the job roles and responsibilities further with you to understand your requirements. I am available from Monday to Friday, 10:00 am to 5:00 pm. I am reachable at xyz@gmail.com or 912548786333.
I look forward to being contacted for further proceedings.
Yours Sincerely,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Sam, I trust this letter finds you in good he...
^^^
Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ss a job advertisement in your company. Its a part-time Project Manager Job posted ...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rojects with a budget of 170 million. I am attaching my resume for your consump...
^
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th you to understand your requirements. I am available from Monday to Friday, 10:...
^
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Monday to Friday, 10:00 am to 5:00 pm. I am reachable at xyz@gmail.com or 912548...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble at xyz@gmail.com or 912548786333. I look forward to being contacted for fur...
^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... further proceedings. Yours Sincerely, Jack
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98895027624 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30793924881 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9736323614 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332398651547 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101237025999 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899594253543 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174451311204 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119155196704 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.