Dear Kyle,
Thanks for your email that give me a details of what is happening in your life. I am glad to know that you really enjoy the pleasant weather here.
In your e-mail, you are seeking my advice to learn something new. I think playing an indoor game such as table tennis, is the best idea for you. I suggested this activity because it will save you from the ultraviolet rays as well from the pollution outside. By playing indoor games, you will feel more energetic and easily concentrate on it. Usually, I am free on weekends, even in the evenings too. So, I can join you.
Learning to play table tennis is rather easier and enjoyable. In fact, you have to move fast and spin your wrist as you can to hit the ball then you can make the winner of this game. This game requires speed which helps the individuals to make them healthier and stronger. But before doing all that, you need to practice by bouncing the ball on the wall. Then, you will be able to control the ball on the bat. I have a better option for you if you serious to learn this activity, How about to learn this activity together?
I am eagerly awaiting your response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Rai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Kyle, Thanks for your email that give me a det...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a detail' or simply 'details'?
Suggestion: a detail; details
...e, Thanks for your email that give me a details of what is happening in your life. I am...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, well, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39545454545 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23345616619 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4272646415 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4375 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236708036789 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919241339162 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117658899296 0.0603063233224 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186491276676 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798985682695 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.