In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
It is witnessed in some nations that many people are inclined to give birth at an older age. This essay will elaborate on some underlying causes of this tendency and argue that positive effects are more significant than negative ones.
While explanations for this trend vary, there are two primary factors contributing to delayed childbirth. First and foremost, in the developed world, the labor market and the living costs become more hostile which are highly demanding personal time and endeavor to survive. Therefore, young adults spend the first years of their adulthood laying a concrete foundation for their careers rather than getting married early and raising offspring. The second reason worth mentioning is the increasing financial responsibilities of raising a child. It is evident from the ascending inflation rate and price hikes in accommodation, nourishment, medical care, clothes, and education fees for babies. Therefore, many young people prioritize saving and establishing sound financial sources before embarking on parenthood.
Although there are a few drawbacks, I believe that late parenthood exerts a more advantageous influence on society and families. From the positive perspective, it brings to the betterment of life quality and comprehensive education for children if they are born to prosperous and experienced parents. As a result, they can contribute more to society when they grow up. Additionally, parents may also reap the benefits of this trend to achieve certain professional milestones, as their first working years are not interrupted by pregnancy and childcare. On the one hand, one of the main negative impacts is that the longer the childbirth deferment is, the more health risks women may face, such as the risk of miscarriage or premature birth. Fortunately, such dangers could be prevented thanks to advanced medical technology so this drawback is not considerable.
In conclusion, people in some countries do not put the top priority on having children at an earlier age due to their high regard for their careers and the belief that a better financial state will be better for a child. Personally, I believe the positive effects outweigh the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38260869565 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96255990397 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2442192669 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155479846126 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420069192401 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630206775991 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105682808069 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814196218364 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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