Some people believe that the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It has been argued by some that newspapers are the best way to keep abreast of current affairs while others claim that other digital media are better hubs of information. In my opinion, both sources have their advantages which are elaborated on in this essay, yet modern forms of media are superior due to their ability to provide recently updated news and other useful functions.
On the one hand, there are good grounds for arguing that newspapers still hold the most popular position among newsreaders. First and foremost, while internet platforms are vulnerable to fake news and false information, newspapers are more authentic and trustworthy. Indeed, most newspaper is written by professional journalists, and undergo vigorous censorship carefully by prestigious publishers, and authorities before being made available to the public. In contrast, news on social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, can be misleading as there are few regulations about what Internet users can post on these sites. Furthermore, those who choose printed newspapers as their source of information are less likely to be affected by distractions, including advertisements and notifications that often pop up on people’s screens when they use their smartphones or laptops.
However, I agree with the assertion that newer media outlets outweigh traditional newspapers because of their high-speed information delivery and diversity. Online media can provide up-to-the-minute information about events as they happen so those who read internet-based newspapers can get hourly news updates that are essential for their life or work. For instance, for stock investors, as keeping up with the frenzy trend of the financial market and the business activities of companies could make or break their success, online platforms of the press become the most effective way for them. In addition, spectators of modern means of media are provided with a comprehensive perspective under multiple forms from various sources of information. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, apart from reading news on familiar social media such as Facebook or Twitter, people can access the official website of WHO to listen to analysis of medical professionals to be better informed about the danger as well as watch videos documenting tragic deaths caused by coronavirus over the world at that time.
In conclusion, although it cannot be denied certain benefits of reading newspapers, I believe modern media forms are preferable since they provide readers with hourly updated information and various experiences. Therefore, it is not surprising to witness traditional papers declining gradually in importance in digital world nowadays.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... certain benefits of reading newspapers, I believe modern media forms are prefera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75930521092 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58571698255 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600496277916 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4212763457 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.538461538 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209478065121 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722825395895 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663561925738 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129255969571 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828206591685 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.72 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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