International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
International Tourism has globally brought a lot of beneficial impacts to many places, and also its influences on indigenous people and the environment. I personally believe that international tourism would bring about more significant disadvantages that I will outline in the following essay.
Firstly, perhaps, the main drawback for this issue is that global tourism tends to make the local region landscape is considered to become more commercial. This is because many tourism facilities such as luxurious villas or five-star hotels are built in order to support tourism activities. By establishing these amenities, local inhabitants may feel disturbed and pressed by unpleasant situations, such as noises and crowds continuously. Another adverse effect is the existence of acculturation. this happens as that the younger generation pays more attention to foreign culture rather than local wisdom. In this case, they are generally attracted and try to imitate it obviously. As a result, when local wisdom is being forgotten slowly, it would definitely be the ground for the disappearance of precious aspects of native society.
Turning to essential impacts, it is irrefutable that one of the advantages for this issue is enlarging job opportunities. This means that, local residents can become a guide or open a traditional food restaurant and sell unique souvenirs, ranging from trinkets to traditional clothing. Thus, they can directly promote local culture while earning income. Moreover, global tourism opens larger opportunities not only for the indigenous dwellers but also the places to be well-known around the world. For example, when the destination is properly managed, it would be attractive for both travelers and backpackers.
In summary, it seems to me that making the local landscape to become commercial and ignoring local wisdom are substantial drawbacks. Thus, this outweighs its potential benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6198630137 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07190635449 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9754458222 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188758678886 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05700131911 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526964233989 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126043751178 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681023791937 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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