The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of people age in three different groups in the Yemen and Italy in 2000 and also give data for 2050.
It is obvious that the by 2000 the group of 15-59 years old people has near the half percent, while the predict shows this percent will increase more the half present and this group become the most range of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 years group in 2000 and this percent will decline in 2050.
As can be seen, the half of people who lived in Yemen was include 0-14 years in 2000 by 50.1% and the second group by 46.3% was 15-59 years people, this range of group include who can work for the government before their tired age, while the teenagers percentage in 2050 will decrease about 14% and the worker group will raise more than 11% the last 60+ years has not more significant by 3.6 % in 2000 and 5.7% in 2050 in the Yemen. In constrant, in Italy the 15-59 years has the majority percent by 61.6 and other two range of ages 0-14 and 60+ were in order to 24.% and 14.3% that the forecasts will show the adult people percent will sharply increased more than 42% and the teenagers rate drop around 3 % in addition the percent of 15-59 years people of society in Italy fall to 46.2%
As a result, by 2050 the range of people who live in Italy will increase and the society goes old and the Yemen has completely different situation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of ...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ange of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 yea...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ange of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 yea...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...e half of people who lived in Yemen was include 0-14 years in 2000 by 50.1% and the sec...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...nment before their tired age, while the teenagers percentage in 2050 will decrease about ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he worker group will raise more than 11% the last 60+ years has not more signific...
^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun range seems to be countable, so consider using: 'two ranges'.
Suggestion: two ranges
... the majority percent by 61.6 and other two range of ages 0-14 and 60+ were in order to 2...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the forecasts will show the adult people percent will sharply increased more than...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37735849057 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04222562894 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441509433962 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.482189469 43.030603864 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.0 112.824112599 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 22.9334400587 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126419386338 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10421595628 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781956496853 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117731499437 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778560613577 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.2 10.3012195122 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of ...
^^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ange of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 yea...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ange of people in the society. In Italy the the maximum percentage related to 15-59 yea...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...e half of people who lived in Yemen was include 0-14 years in 2000 by 50.1% and the sec...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...nment before their tired age, while the teenagers percentage in 2050 will decrease about ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he worker group will raise more than 11% the last 60+ years has not more signific...
^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun range seems to be countable, so consider using: 'two ranges'.
Suggestion: two ranges
... the majority percent by 61.6 and other two range of ages 0-14 and 60+ were in order to 2...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the forecasts will show the adult people percent will sharply increased more than...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37735849057 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04222562894 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441509433962 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.482189469 43.030603864 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.0 112.824112599 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 22.9334400587 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126419386338 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10421595628 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781956496853 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117731499437 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778560613577 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.2 10.3012195122 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.