the plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict modifications to Porth Harbour between 2000 and today.
Overall, the area has a number of significant changes, the most important of which are the construction of some buildings.
Looking at the details, there is a new path connecting directly from Main Road to the Car Park, and the road connecting the Car Park and the Road has disappeared. Besides, the Road has a new way to connect to a Hotel, where used to be the disused Castle.
Looking at the details, there are several new infrastructures here. A new place for Showers and toilets has been built in the North of the larger Car Park. The Marina and the Fishing boast have exchanged their locations, and a new Dock has been built to allow more boats to land in. In addition, a new area for Cafes and shops has been built next to the Lifeboat, and the Public beach has become a Private beach, which is only for people in the Hotel next to it.
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people think that competition at work at school and in daily life is a good thing others believe that we should try to cooperate more rather than competing against each other Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., where used to be the disused Castle. Looking at the details, there are severa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5119047619 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53266639986 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4089833242 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656851304557 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345866481733 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468650890701 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528014880597 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573193553409 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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