You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter:
-state which course you are enrolled in - web-designing in javascript
-provide details about the noted differences - only basic html is covered
-suggest what actions would you like him to take - enroll in other course or pay back
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the three days course on Web Designing that is being conducted at your institution.
As per the details mentioned in the admission brochure, this course includes the latest web-based technologies such as struts, javascript and servlets. However, after attending the first-day introductory session of this course, I came across the fact that it is going to cover only the basic HTML to design web-pages. Moreover, there is no practical designing assessment in this particular course as per the description in the prospectus.
In reference to the details in the brochure, I had paid Rs.2000 for the enrolment of this course, which does not prove beneficial. Therefore, I request you to kindly update my enrollment and assign my name for the course on the latest web technologies. Also, if no such course is available, I urge you to refund my admission fee.
I shall be very thankful to you.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Prabh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-13 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is being conducted at your institution. As per the details mentioned in the admi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24277456647 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00572476605 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.984526043 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374310292222 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124537604213 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503345897883 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161984627943 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678139460011 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.