The unlimited use of cars may have many problems. What are those problems ? In order to reduce the problems should we discourage people to use cars
In contemporary society, cars seems to be more affordable, thereby becoming one of the most common vehicle in the world. This mean of transportation, however, can result in some concerning issues relating to the traffic congestion as well as our environment.
First and foremost, in regard to transport network, the expansion of private automobile ownership has induced traffic jam, which is still a persistent problems in many countries. Traffic gridlock in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam is a typical example. This problem is often exacerbated in soaked, rainy days, when a long line of cars blocked a long stretch of flooded road. Paris where there's a lot of car using is also one of the most congested cities.
In addition, gasoline cars had negative impacts on the atmosphere and the environment we are living in as well. This is because of the emissions released from engine. According to the New York Times, the USA's air quality index had increased dramatically in 2019 and the article also indicated that it was due to the abundance of cars.
Under these circumstances, people should definitely be incentivized not to use car too often. In order to address these problems the interventions and support from the government is indispensable, they should discourage people from buying and using car as a main form of transportation, simultaneously, operate and renovate more public transportation like trams, bus, train for dwellers
In conclusion, despise some potential convenience, using car have posed significant issues associated with air quality and traffic conditions, hence it is advisable for people to limit the frequent use of car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun car seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of cars'.
Suggestion: a lot of cars
...tch of flooded road. Paris where theres a lot of car using is also one of the most congested...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09533808097 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.420737518 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329499477431 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924286395752 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952771603666 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157022286992 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099042326232 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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