These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
With the rise in modernization, life has become very easy in various aspects. People has also developed the sense of exploration due to all the changes that has taken place during this period of time. The most controversial issue today related to is travelling and tourism nowdays; easy or difficult campared to past? I will examine this topic from both point of views.
As we know social media has boomed in recent years which has gave access to beautiful tourist spots to people. This has encouraged most of the people to explore new tourist places and make memories, which helps in boosting the economy of the country.
Moreover, it also helps people in learning different cultures and exploration of their equisite heritage. Travelling helps people to bond with people of different countries and ethnicity. However, the accessibility to tourism has also some demerits like tourist are spoling the tourist places by distructing the natural beauty of the place and throwing waste.
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to believe that since the disadvantages outweighs the advantages therefore, increase in tourism is positive because of its outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17258883249 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7219199957 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9922931442 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193765469141 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695476878559 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579575872547 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107398808429 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396953053008 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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