These days, an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors and does not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest ?
It is widely acknowledged that a growing number of people who live in cities tend to ignore their neighbors and do not interact closely with the community. In this essay, I will explain some convincing reasons, and then suggest some solutions to address this problem.
There are many major factors leading to the increase in the number of people’s lack of interaction with their neighbors and community. With regard to the former, individuals living in the fast-paced world tend to spend more time working, so they do not have sufficient time to care about their surroundings. In addition to this, individuals tend to return to their homes immediately for eating and sleeping after during the day working hard. When it comes to the latter, individuals prefer to spend their time with people close to them as it helps them to expand their network. Moreover, this helps them to have more opportunities for promotion but decreases the likelihood of interaction with their local community.
Some measures should be taken into consideration to alleviate this problem. In terms of organized events, this is an effective way for individuals to have more chances to connect together. Cookout decoration days, for example, by doing all the stuff together, it helps them to know more about the personality traits of their buddies. With these merits, this increases a good relationship between them in the long run. Another point is that individuals should try to build relationships with their neighbors because it brings distinct benefits. They probably let their children mingle with other’s children reducing the ignorance about their local community.
In conclusion, while there are numerous compelling arguments for this phenomenon, there are many approaches existing to tackle this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30985915493 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80822607773 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9051261013 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178493659664 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688660551977 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045807737404 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106943529519 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485352974747 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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