The diagram shows how biofuel product called ethanol is produced

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The diagram shows how biofuel product called ethanol is produced

The following diagram illustrates how a bio fuel called Ethanol is made.
It’s clear that there are 8 distinct stages starting from plants and trees and ending up with Ethanol.
Initially, it requires sunlight and carbon dioxide to make photosynthesis process to produce its own food by it self for the growing up of trees and plants. After that, crop is harvested. Then, it is reprocessed to be a small crops. Next, it is converted to simpler structure which is cellulose.
The step after, cellulose is processed to a smaller structure which is the next step to turn into a simple sugar. The next step, Microbes is added on the sugar to finally produce Ethanol. Lastly, Ethanol was distributed on countries and being used in cars, buses, airplanes or even in manufactures. Then, the ethanol is combusted to produce carbon dioxide. Having completed all the steps, the cycle begins again

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...esis process to produce its own food by it self for the growing up of trees and plants....
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, lastly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7039395128 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3896842606 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4545454545 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201027414761 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710962800765 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950876076128 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131659761602 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109214899129 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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