A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Tourism is considered a big income for some places in the world and help pay countries debt, but sometimes it can cause conflicts if it’s not handled properly, this essay will discuss the pros and cons of the modern world.
Some people ideal that tourism is about visiting the countries beaches and mountains, but its really about exploring the richness and the obtainable resources, to illustrate tourism have the dominance to make a divergence on peoples life and see the true colors of the world, an example of how Egypt can be seen differently ,because of its formidable sculptures and its own outstanding past, a handful of people when Egypt is mentioned in conversation all of they think about is the stereotypes like deserts and camels but that’s in the past over time people realized that it’s not just that and Egypt has a variety and when people really understand that they started to visit more and more which made a huge income, which made Egypt merit on tourism.
Tourism can be varying to a country because its purportedly makes a lot of money, but can a country hinge on it only? Of course not, as mentioned, Egypt relied on it and a disaster happened. It changed everything, not everything can be trusted blindly even if they put a lot of endeavor, to be clear you got to be delicate and try to alter when things go south. As an example if a tourist came to visit any country he has to bear and sufferer there culture and traditions because they now coexist together and if not it’s there motherland and now they want to get rid of them which can put the tourist in a lot of dread.
Peoples perception is derived from what the see and hear which can make a lot of assumptions, but what really matters is what they’re passionate about and the truth which can be truly scarce, tourism is important and everything comes with price which can be good or bad in the end you have to see the what it really takes in the modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59490084986 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49990971597 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501416430595 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.180419955 49.4020404114 429% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.714285714 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4285714286 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253683400522 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123455261202 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711894863681 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170397994103 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450051582796 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.65 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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