Music and other arts seem to be features of every society.
In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals?
Music and other forms of art are deeply ingrained in every society, serving as essential elements that enrich both individual lives and the collective fabric of communities.
For individuals, music and art offer a multitude of benefits. Engaging with these creative expressions can have a profound impact on mental and emotional well-being. Listening to music has been shown to reduce stress, anxiety, and depression, while creating art can be a therapeutic outlet for emotions. Additionally, artistic pursuits stimulate cognitive functions, enhancing problem-solving skills, creativity, and critical thinking.
On a societal level, music and art play a crucial role in shaping cultural identity and heritage. They reflect the values, beliefs, and history of a society, preserving traditions and passing them down to future generations. Art also serves as a powerful tool for social commentary, raising awareness of important issues and inspiring social change. Furthermore, the arts contribute to economic growth by creating jobs in various industries, such as music production, film, and visual arts.
In conclusion, music and other arts are invaluable assets to both individuals and societies. They enhance well-being, foster cultural identity, and contribute to economic development. By nurturing and supporting the arts, we enrich our lives and strengthen the vitality of our communities.
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- Important historical objects in museums around the world should be returned to their country of origin To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80676328502 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15840814646 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5059337033 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330082847874 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113064387318 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108279622499 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187141275638 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305927301854 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.