A letter to my idol
Dear Justin
First and foremost, I am writing this letter to you today to tell you how much you have inspired me, your music is a huge part of my childhood. When I was a child, I wonder why you make an impression on me, I can’t wait to see what you’ll create next. All your songs are completely touch my heart, this makes me have more motivation to go through the challenges in my life.
Beside that, I have currently known about your news, it was so marvelous when you come through tough things. It’s truly impressive how you turn difficult experiences into art and I admire your ability to change your feelings into your music. It shows you are a genius artist, your opinion about music makes people all over the world look up to you.
All in all, I hope you keep being yourself and bring to life more magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you will make an effort to support you at heart.
My boy,
Nguyễn Nhật Huy
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Justin First and foremost, I am writing this letter to you today to ...
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Suggestion: I
...ic is a huge part of my childhood. When I was a child, I wonder why you make an i...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...rt of my childhood. When I was a child, I wonder why you make an impression on me...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...onder why you make an impression on me, I can’t wait to see what you’ll create ne...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'touched'.
Suggestion: touched
...ate next. All your songs are completely touch my heart, this makes me have more motiv...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...he challenges in my life. Beside that, I have currently known about your news, i...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...turn difficult experiences into art and I admire your ability to change your feel...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... the world look up to you. All in all, I hope you keep being yourself and bring ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... bring to life more magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you wi...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you will make an effort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30167597765 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18722440945 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.192266832 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887047723904 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481983223304 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683412002968 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493224611971 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697524935546 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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