Some people think that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary life, there is more and more advertising everywhere. Therefore, some people believe that advertising has positive effects on finances . However, others believe it has bad effects because it will make people feel confused about who they are and what items they have. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people believing that advertising has positive economic effects . First, advertising subsidies are believed to equalize product opportunities among stores and companies. This advertising support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall brand awareness enrollment but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, advertising support would probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. Moreover, support from advertising could help to choose the best items and depends on their favourite. In fact, it is acknowledged that advertising and product human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technology development in any nation.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once many people rely on advertising and some people believe that it makes them feel dissatisfied. First, advertising would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on a country. Generating no income from products and people can feel disappointed with their items. Example, with advertising about cosmetics, some people may experience irritation when using it. Therefore, it’s one of the reasons why some people say they don’t know who they are and what they have. Meaning that, there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare systems and transport infrastructure. Second, advertising would tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in research products and potentially wasting time that these young people could have spent on suitable items. It, instead,would be a more suitable advertising if the resources were focused on supporting less privileged yet gifted people.
In conclusion, despite the long-term advertising on humans that can help to boost economic growth and also help people to choose suitable products. However, it has more drawbacks than advantages for the country and young people. From my point of view, citizens should consider their items and government should consider and checking the product from companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64961636829 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89259821319 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562659846547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7074068263 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.19047619 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33681428192 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103707521793 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111296833105 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21005637594 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124552934759 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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