Some people believe that the development of artificial intelligence will lead to widespread unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern life, artificial intelligence has become one of the important parts. Therefore, some people think that humans will replace humans in the future and cause unemployment. From my perspective, I agree with the statement and this essay will support my features.
In this contemporary life, there are many technological devices such as mobile phones, tablets or computers. It helps people to communicate with others and especially with older people to keep in touch with their family. Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of artificial intelligence working many jobs in this life. First, the development of intelligence is believed to equalize products among factors regardless of their background. This development support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall consumption rate of people but also to mitigate their feeling of tiredness when working for a long time, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, development of artificial intelligence would result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that knowledgeable and skilled human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nation.
Besides that, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once development of artificial intelligence. First, the development of modern life with artificial intelligence would likely correspond with financial and unemployment. Generating no income from working, people would become over-reliance on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare systems and transport infrastructure. Second, development of artificial intelligence would tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in working, thereby adding great burdens for staff and companies and potentially wasting time that these young people could have spent on suitable career paths. Example, in this day, artificial intelligence can replace humans for teaching in a university or high school and especially they can have a bigger memory than people can do. It, instead, would be a more working viable option if the resources were focused on supporting the talented people and active people.
In conclusion, despite the long term of technological and especially artificial intelligence. Meanwhile, it has a negative impact on human’s jobs. From my point of view, government and netizens should consider to use artificial intelligence in a right place and situation, it’s can be reliant in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ause unemployment. From my perspective, I agree with the statement and this essay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6253101737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09897445218 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560794044665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7858689938 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.315789474 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234769177394 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721832013206 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391108493585 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140645645464 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402968027453 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.